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Anything in brackets means I'm not sure if I should add it in or not, if there's a / it means I'm not sure to usee what's there or what's in brackets or what there.

Anyway would love opinions so please don't be afraid to be harsh.


I think we need a win some times
Something to prepare for life's last lines
With sentiment backed against the wall
Who cares if we all flicker and fall

For my thoughts can't be re-arranged
And neither can (your) words for suspect games
My honesty's inkeeping with the days
Where no one knows your names
Two more years of this might break me
No longer thought of gracefully
And I think it's time to say my
Dealings have come back to haunt me

I've gotta (/I'll) hedge my bets with something new
Pick a life and see it through
Stolen laughs can line what I
Won't lose out in the dews
Can I know it all too well now
I think I do

I learn the truth beneath more words
And can't own the days (that make me/) that feel too old
Too many long lost dreams that
Strain all my smiles just lately

I think we need a win some times
Something to prepare for life's last lines
With sentiment backed against the wall
Who cares if we all flicker and fall

I've gotta (/I'll) hedge my bets with something new
Pick a life and see it through
Stolen laughs can line what I
Won't lose out in the dews
Can I know it all too well now
I think I do

I've gotta (/I'll) hedge my bets with something new
Pick a life and see it through
Stolen laughs can line what I
Won't lose out in the dews
Can I know it all too well now
I think I do