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some good ideas going on there mate. its good that you have started jamming, and even a simple little piece like this will help you shred in the future
also the tone made the plucking of the notes really audible, and the timing was slightly off at some times. overall solid piece, and nice note choices

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28574818#post28574818