Hey i would love some feed back on my playing.
It is improvised and lacks some melodicy. something i strive for is cleanliness in my playing.
C4C Thanks alot!

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Last edited by Spitty33 at Nov 23, 2011,
i actually like the fact that they contrast each other, at one point it sounded like the rhythm was off and failing but on purpose while the dirty grimy lead soared up above, that's just my little take on it though
Sounded ok, it was probably more melodic than you think. Your playing is fairly clean.

One thing that I noticed is that in between phrases, you tend to stop on one note for a split second before you go into a next phrase. It's kind of noticeable. When playing improv you don't have to solo over every second of the track, knowing when to stop is a good skill to have.