#1
I'm working on a couple of riffs. So far I've got an intro, first verse and a bridge in that order. It's going to definitely be death metal. What could you tell me about the structure so far? Also I manually double tracked, thought it would make it a lot fuller.. what do you think?

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/touke/music/all/play1063277

I'm aware of the hideous click at 1:19, my bad. I had to stop and rerecord that part due to a mess up
And the diddly at the very end is just random, but possibly a good idea to use that same chord next?
Last edited by touke at Nov 26, 2011,
#2
Oh yeah, this is really awesome. I love how thoughtful the riffs are. Not just simple riffings. I wish I could write like that . The guitar tone is awesome, and the double tracking makes it sound pretty heavy. This song sounds like its going to be intense. Keep up the good work.
#3
sounds really good dude, the riffs are really decent, the quality of recording is too. I think it will be a sick song. also, thanks for listening to mine lol
#5
Thanks for the crit. Just listened to your song, and it sounds pretty good. I liked the riffs you used, and the tone was pretty good for death metal. Honestly if you added a bass track to this as it is it would be pretty killer, I like it