#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Zeletros/

Please check out the vocals. I really had no idea what to sing about or what to sing or how. The quality sucks, everything sucks, because I done this in about 10 minutes or so.

I always sucked at singing, I have absolutely no ear. I started practicing singing along some time ago, I don't remember. I think I've gotten better, but it's still not good enough.
#2
I would expect to hear this in a stand up comedy show. I lol'd at points.
#3
Quote by Jemstar
I would expect to hear this in a stand up comedy show. I lol'd at points.



Thanks


I thought about doing some comedy music... it's fun to do. But I can't sing that well to make it ... more fun or something.
#6
Quote by AJScott
Ha, I actually enjoyed this. Quite funny. I like the guitar parts.



Thanks.. but I'm really looking for critics towards vocals. I heard that I messed up some parts, but some seemed fine to me
#7
it's hard to really comment on the singing when you're mumbling some lyrics that have no flow.

like one dude said, this is something you would expect from a stand up comedy show.

post a song where you are actually singing.
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#8
Quote by drying out
it's hard to really comment on the singing when you're mumbling some lyrics that have no flow.

like one dude said, this is something you would expect from a stand up comedy show.

post a song where you are actually singing.



IMO, there's some mumble and there's some singing there >_>
#9
Well I went 2 minutes in and it was mostly bob dylan talking
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#10
Zeletros,
I wish the vocals were less pitchy, and sometimes the timing is questionable, but otherwise I liked the vocal style and sound (considering you're not recording in a high end studio). The rhythm guitar sounds similar to "Every Breath You Take" by the Police. I found some of the lyrics funny. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1499189
#11
Hey,

I'm kinda new to singing too. It's impossible to judge your vocals here tbh, they dont stand out at all in the mix. You should record a easy cover song with clear audio and get people to give you some feedback. It will help you realise the limitations of your voice when you record your own tracks. Btw the guitar playing was nice.

Check out mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1496246