The analog-tape-machine-gone-beserk noise (0:30) was kind of annoying, but otherwise, I think everything sounds quite nice! Actually on second listen, I was more OK with that sound. Very good audio quality (though the tape-machine-noise was ear-piercing for me). Sounds good overall. I like the melodies. Please review my music at this link:

From now on I think I'm going to just make two versions of every one of these types of songs I write. I'll put up the one without the ear rape tomorrow, but I'm keeping it in the original because it's just part of the vision. Compromise!

Also, will check those out tomorrow.
Sounds like a good idea haha, looking forward to listening to it!