So I was wondering if all you loving fellow UGers would help me out and give some critique on some of my songs. http://soundcloud.com/danlarsen most of the songs are from my solo project letters experiment (The best of which i think is Blind Illusion) while one other is from my project with a friend called rational transition. By the way I know the production on them is crap, but school got in the way with exams so i havn't got round to fixing them yet, but hey give me a break I'm 16. Anyway any feedback would be appreciated.
I've only listened to Blind Illusion because you said it was your best song, and I really like it, especially that cloudy distorted-sounding backgroundi and the really clean guitar playing on it.
I've bookmarked your link so I can give this song as many listens as I want, and I'll probably listen to your other songs later.
Sorry if my critic isn't useful, I can't think about anything bad to say about it.

Please check my songs and leave some feedback, I would greatly appreciate it :
They are all improvised, and I have to say that I'm not a very good musician, but I'm trying to improve.

EDIT : I've just listened to Haze, and it's pretty good too. Sounds like you did a very good job on your songs.
Last edited by negativecreep01 at Nov 28, 2011,
I like the guitar parts on Have it All alot, however i do think the vocals need quite a bit of work, you do have a good voice for alternative rock but i think maybe you could do with a little more practice so everything stays in tune. Good work though.

EDIT: oh btw, please could you have a listen to this one of my band's songs: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1500538 its quite poppy and im not sure if it'll be exactly to your liking, but please check it out when you can
Last edited by em!ly at Dec 1, 2011,
Sorry i forgot to mention that the first song Have It All is actually a collaboration with a friend on a project we call Rational Transition. On it i wrote the instrumentation apart from bass while he did that, sang and had some input on arrangement. The songs I was actually after crit from were the ones below, so if you have time input on those would be appreciated. (The best song is blind illusion)