#2
At first when I started listening to this, I really didn't hear anything special. But I put it aside, and continued. Over all I like it. Although the ending was a bit disappointing in it's anti climaticness, for a lack of a better word. I can hear a hip hop or rap lyric over this. The beat you have for the first half is sick, maybe try growing from that or branching?

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1498537
and/or
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1498009