#1
Do you understand the trouble of knowing,
right from wrong, and weak from strong?
Well I have spent my whole life brewing,
theories of why, what, where, and when.
But I always leave out the 'who',
I'm not concerned with who's happy and blue.
I always leave out the 'who',
no, I'm not concerned with me or you.

People they say my kingdom is falling,
but I'm content knowing it's held in my hands.
When my towers crack and the people start running,
I'll just move on to my next plan.
I always know what to do,
my head's always level, yes it's running smooth.
I always know what to do,
I never waste time with thinking it through.

Dried as the fossils that lie under your skin,
that you call a structure, holding you in.
I was raised by thunder and shaped by the sky,
I've been waiting to tell you, I came with the wind...

When I lay in rubble, my home has been broken,
I'll stare at the sky, and envy the clouds.
They simply observe as we meddle and wander,
and I'm glad to say, I'll soon be like them.
What more have you got to lose?
Scratch at the questions that bother you.
What more have you got to lose?
The truth you've been seeking is waiting for you

Drenched, as the rain slides down from your skin,
you thought it would drown you, it just gave you a rinse.
I was raised by thunder and shaped by the sky,
I've been waiting to tell you, I came with the wind...
Can't believe how strange it is to be anything at all.
Last edited by Snotfish at Dec 3, 2011,
#3
just brilliant, and great rhyme scheme
Please call me Rainer, was 16 and empty minded when I made my profile.

Sometimes I talk to myself too...but never on the internet.
#4
Maybe it's just how I'm reading it, but I think the line "that you call a structure, holding you within" would flow better if it were "that you call a structure, holding you in".
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#5
thank you all so much for feed back.

also, girlgerms, I really like that suggestion and I agree, it does sound better. If you don't mind I'm going to change it to that
Can't believe how strange it is to be anything at all.