Join date: Jan 2010
984 IQ
Just a little something I've been working on. Still a work in progress, obviously. I stopped because I didn't have anymore feels at the moment, and I didn't want to force anything.
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Join date: Jun 2011
125 IQ
Did'nt like the "Twinkly Things" solo part
"I've said that playing the blues is like having to be black twice. Stevie Ray Vaughan missed on both counts, but I never noticed. "
B. B. King

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I prefer to play with your mother

But I suppose guitar will have to do
The Kevin Baconater's
Join date: Nov 2010
546 IQ
The song wins on the instrument names alone. I like the dynamics of it a lot.

The only part that feels off is the distorted section at the end; the C octave being played feels odd. Maybe its just me, but it feels like it doesn't fit that well.
Blood Elf Bassist
Join date: Jun 2007
403 IQ
#4, it really flows and everything fits there perfectly.

i really like twinkly stuff but i've never wrote a "twinkly emo" song, really liked this one
Join date: Mar 2008
7,674 IQ
I like what you've got so far. My suggestion would be, although maybe not immediately, to use the intro arpeggios on the overdriven guitar. Other than that, I don't have much to say; nice work.