aCloudConnected
dead
Join date: Jan 2010
984 IQ
#1
Just a little something I've been working on. Still a work in progress, obviously. I stopped because I didn't have anymore feels at the moment, and I didn't want to force anything.
Attachments:
emooo songssss.gp5
yuvalg
Guitar-bender
Join date: Jun 2011
125 IQ
#2
Did'nt like the "Twinkly Things" solo part
"I've said that playing the blues is like having to be black twice. Stevie Ray Vaughan missed on both counts, but I never noticed. "
B. B. King

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I prefer to play with your mother

But I suppose guitar will have to do
Kenjisan231
The Kevin Baconater's
Join date: Nov 2010
546 IQ
#3
The song wins on the instrument names alone. I like the dynamics of it a lot.

The only part that feels off is the distorted section at the end; the C octave being played feels odd. Maybe its just me, but it feels like it doesn't fit that well.
Subguy
Blood Elf Bassist
Join date: Jun 2007
403 IQ
#4
i...like....twinkly..stuff, it really flows and everything fits there perfectly.

i really like twinkly stuff but i've never wrote a "twinkly emo" song, really liked this one
herby190
UnBanned
Join date: Mar 2008
7,674 IQ
#5
I like what you've got so far. My suggestion would be, although maybe not immediately, to use the intro arpeggios on the overdriven guitar. Other than that, I don't have much to say; nice work.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1413914