Had to write this for a class I have. I don't normally write lyrics and I don't think these are very good. Please provide honest feedback

Here goes everything

sleep for the hope of a new day
hush for your mouth has no say

This is not who I normally am
but he is someone you know
he was calm when content
but know he wants to be dead

Those thoughts about you
to bring back my life
my mind of disease
Its time to begin a new era
starting with me