#1
Let me know what you guys think. Any criticism welcome!


Alive but hardly living
A pinata for superficial healing
Seasoned beatings stir the pot, it's seething
Fear sutures the mouth, silence deafens the ears
Time to get back, watch out it's open season!

As I wake from my nightmare
Same old monsters torment me
"Where're you going? Come on back!
We'll brake your ****ing skull in half!"

What good's this life if I'm always running
No time to stop it's always get set and go!
The easy way out is a tormentor's victory
I've got a one-way ticket to this hell far from hell

When pushed to the brink this primal instinct
Takes over what once was left of me
The brain overloads, the synapses snap
There's no telling when I may come back

What good's this life that I've been given
It's just the roll of a die so who's to blame
That man upstairs?, well he's just been watchin'
As I ride off the rails to this hell far from hell

The job is done, my monsters lay deathly
I can breathe in the day without clouds in sight
The horizon grows crimson as headlines read,
"Psychopath kills, innocent victims in doubt"

What good's this life, an unwinable game
Where victims are victimized and schemers are kings
If we look in the mirror and pull off the mask
This hell far from hell reflects Humanity's past
People don't really go to heaven when they die. They're taken to a special place and burned - Sherlock Holmes


Your authority is not recognized in Fort Kickass!

It's not like bullshit, more like poetry.
Last edited by )v(egaFan90 at Dec 11, 2011,
#2
Does anyone have any comments? This will be in a thrash style if that helps.
People don't really go to heaven when they die. They're taken to a special place and burned - Sherlock Holmes


Your authority is not recognized in Fort Kickass!

It's not like bullshit, more like poetry.