#1
Kinda of something just threw together the other night, havnt really put alot of time into it just seeing what people think.

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As the storm rolls in, my light disappears
gives way to the dark that I'll always fear
As the storm rolls in, my light disappears
gives way to the dark that I'll always fear

I stand alone with my back to the sky
Because I have hope and a will to survive
In this realm of perception, I'm but a ghost
Like all the lost ones searching for direction

Would you lead me away if you took my hand.
Find the break in these clouds, a leap of faith
and bring new light to my day
burst out through the grey be my hope for today
be the one that will save me

A world inside my head where i cant think
It's ****ed up, broken and beyond repair
a metaphor for a life that isnt fair
I cannot be left here, in this world alone
This pain, Sinking right into the bone

the storm rolls in, my light disappears
gives way to the dark that I'll always fear

Would you lead me away if you took my hand.
Find the break in these clouds, a leap of faith
and bring new light to my day
burst out through the grey be my hope for today
be the one that will save me

Too many silent nights spent wondering if am alive
But you came into my life now just want you here
You are everything that I’ve been looking for

you are the spark that ignites my soul
And the one reason that I ever felt whole
On a dark night but in plain view
You are the hope that I cling too
And in hindsight I know it’s true

I am the dark and you are the light
You are the one thing
That makes everything right

I miss you and I need you
Please just say it’s the same for you
#2
you committed the rhyme crime! making a song rhyme is a good way to write a song, and im not saying dont do it but some of the best songs around dont rhyme at all. here, rhyming paid off so prehaps there aint alot do crit on. its good? one night u say? it takes me forever longer than that
woodery9896

electro-acoustic guitar player
(looking for band in or near rayleigh - essex - UK)