#2
Well, dammmmmn, this is a pretty good track. Like songwise, and how well its recorded. I'd say just there was points where I wanted to hear you belt out some of the words, and it didnt happen. Screaming could be way better. I think its the pre chorus, I would put the lead guitar up a bit more in the mix. This acoustic part is great too, love the flow of the lyrics. All the music, lyrics, melody is great, well done, im jealous lol
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Last edited by ilovepepsi at Dec 7, 2011,
#3
Really great work. The mix is also extremely well done. Reminds me of a rufio/hawthorne heights vibe. Great work!