#2
My only suggestion is to put this in the "recordings" forum. Yes, I am a smart-ass.
I'm just like the Jonas Brothers,

I'm no longer relevant and write mediocre music.


#3
I've found that people who post youtube links and other such things aren't looking for critique, but for attention and views on their video.

You didn't even post the lyrics here, what do you want really? Attention or help?
Music is an art form that celebrates potential. So long as you're looking for it, you'll always find it.
#5
Well, seeing as it's the songwriting and lyrics forum, a section of the forum to share WRITING, LYRICS AND POETRY - wrong place dude.
Music is an art form that celebrates potential. So long as you're looking for it, you'll always find it.