The muffled intro was cool; it led up to everything quite nicely. The lead guitar in this is awesome! This would sound great with vocals. I like that effect right before the chorus. I thought the bridge riff was the suitable progression for the song.The only thing I didn't really like about this was the drum sound. It sounded "lifeless" to me.
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