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Here are the lyrics for one of the songs that I've written lately, set to be part of a (possible) concept album I'm working on, titled A Game Called Violence . This song is called (as the title suggests) Deeper Into the Chambers of Our Minds. Enjoy!
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Maybe if we get down enough
We’ll reach the other side
We don’t care about molten rock
Because we’ve already died
So dig, my friend, just dig, my love
Don’t fear the cold dirt above
You shouldn’t care about your hands
It’s the smallest of your hurt

Pride yourself with something small
Like darkness in the mud
When light only leads to a fall
Call it the grand deceiver
Falsely making you a believer
And then pushing you down

Deeper and deeper
We travel through these rough halls
We were the ones who built these walls
And we’ll be the ones to tear them down
Deeper and deeper
We fight the hordes of our mind
The thoughts that we must leave behind
In order to overcome ourselves
Deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper
Deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper down

Maybe if we get down enough
We’ll forget that we spoke
Of a painful time of false smiles
A suicidal joke
So dig, my friend, just dig, my love
And feel free to push and shove
Just get out as fast as you can
For we are morbid beings

Pride yourself with something small
Like darkness in the streets
When light only leads to a shot
Straight through our soul and our mind
And then pushing you back far behind
Pushing you far behind

Deeper and deeper
We travel through these rough halls
We were the ones who built these walls
And we’ll be the ones to tear them down
Deeper and deeper
We fight the hordes of our mind
The thoughts that we must leave behind
In order to overcome ourselves
Deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper
Deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper down
I'm just like the Jonas Brothers,

I'm no longer relevant and write mediocre music.


#2
Quote by CPDmusic
Here are the lyrics for one of the songs that I've written lately, set to be part of a (possible) concept album I'm working on, titled A Game Called Violence . This song is called (as the title suggests) Deeper Into the Chambers of Our Minds. Enjoy!
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Maybe if we get down enough
We’ll reach the other side
We don’t care about molten rock
Because we’ve already died
So dig, my friend, just dig, my love
Don’t fear the cold dirt above
You shouldn’t care about your hands
It’s the smallest of your hurt

Pride yourself with something small
Like darkness in the mud


You had me in aw up until here. Everything after is kind of a filler for me. But thats just based off lyrics, not the feel of a song. These first lines are incredible in my opinion, very visual. Thanks for posting this
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