Very good for being your first song!
Since you say "friend" I guess you are missing a member or two, so please try to make a full band!
Also, the clean vocals could use some work =S
But the growls kicked ass!
The screamer is very good, but the clean vocals don't really fit
yes we havent found members for a full band so we're doing everything by our selves. If we get a full band we hopefully will get a singer, i'm just a guitarplayer who wrote a melody and had to sing it, so I couldn't agree more on the vocal comment (otherwise I hope I can learn to sing properly)