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This is one of the newer songs I've been working on, still kind of a work in progress, but just looking for some feed back on it. Is set to a kind of punkish style rock song. But yeah, thanks for any comments in advanced.


Tortured

Maybe if I’m drunk enough
I could learn to let this go
Cause I can never get all that I want
I hope I can piss away
The thoughts that made me mad that day
My head explodes just trying to move on

I thought I might move along
But I guess I just thought wrong
Every time I open up
My heart – another song

No more pressure
No more pain
I’m tired of
All these head game
I want to know if you still care for me

Maybe if I’m drunk tonight
I’ll drown you out with blood shot eyes
And I’ll forget all that you said to me
(Every last word every last word)
Maybe if I’m high tonight
I will not try to cut and fight
And let my scars finally start healing
(I might finally let it die)

I thought I might open up
But that just crashed and burned
Every time I show my faith
I am just proven wrong

No more pressure
No more pain
I’m tired of
All these head games
I wanna know if anyone still cares for me

Maybe if I’m drunk tonight
I’ll drown you out with blood shot eyes
And I’ll forget all that you said to me
(Every last word every last word)
Maybe if I’m high tonight
I will not try to cut and fight
And let my scars finally start healing
(I might let it die tonight)

And I
Don’t know if I can take
Punishing myself for it again
I don’t care
If it’s what’s expected of me
I can’t take another day
I can’t take another day

Maybe if I’m drunk tonight
I’ll drown you out with blood shot eyes
And I’ll forget all that you said to me
(Every last word every last word)
Maybe if I’m high tonight
I will not try to cut and fight