#2
I like it, makes me think light weight oasis with decent singing. Needs fuzz though.
Dude, where's my band?
#3
phew, at first i thought this was going to be something all time low-esque (when you said pop/rock) but im pleasantly suprised nice and simple, really listenable, and i like your voice too, its got character

if you wouldnt mind, could you check out this song by my band? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28723347#post28723347
#4
Hah these lyrics are clever, well done. Little bit of a cliche chord progression but you pull it off well and the unique vocals help a bit. I definitely hear a little oasis in your voice with just a dash of john frusciante (in reference to his solo stuff). super catchy as well!

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1503490
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#5
I liked the lyrics, and that's a big plus in a song like this, because there's not much else really going on, to be honest. I liked your voice, it has a very distinctive sound, and that gives the song a nice, differentiating touch. The progression is pretty uninteresting if you ask me, but the song is short enough that it doesn't really get boring. Overall, nice and simple, good work

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1503571
#6
Thanks guys! Yeah, I had been listening to a lot of John Frusciante's "Niandra Lades" album, as well as a whole bunch of other stuff simmilarly DWI sounding (Girls, etc)