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HERE IS THE SONG: http://soundcloud.com/george-wakerley

This is a sample/demo of my song 'Down Time'. The guitar solo has been cut out (note the fade out and fade in about halfway through the song) and there are no drums.

I was thinking of making the chorus electric (guitar) with distortion, what do you think?
I want a better intro. Suggestions?
Any general opinions or suggestions for this song?

I wrote the music, melody and lyrics etc. all myself, but I had a friend sing on the track for me. It was very much a one-take/rush job so please don't tell me if the vocals are out-of-tune because I already know about that.

Thanks for your help!