#1
Hey guys.

My band and I started writing this song the other day at prac and it's getting pretty close to finished. My issue is that I feel as though there is something missing at bar 20-21. I don't know what it is, but it just feels like there should be something else before that breakdown. Any ideas?
Also, tell me what you think ^-^

And just wondering, what genre would you guys say it is ?

Thanks guys ^-^
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#2
I think a little fill on the drums, like a snare - double kick pattern - snare + cymbal type thing would lead into it really well. Or if you had a clean guitar part playing during the big chord ringing out.
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#3
I agree that there should be drums, but more of a giant tom roll, like in "Tom Sawyer" by Rush, but heavier, like in "Erotomania" by Dream Theater (go look, the roll I'm talking about is in both of them).
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