Fat g0r0T,
People come to this forum to get their music reviewed, and I review lots of songs. What's the problem with that?
I'm a huge fan of hip hop/rap, and I really like the idea. Like aaron said, the drum beat just doesn't go with the piano. I might recommend to try and slow the piano down a bit. It just might help give it a slightly darker vibe. Add a refrain to it too. The same piano sample over and over gets very repetitive. I really like where you're going with it though. The most important thing at the moment is to get that drum beat down though.

I can honestly say I have really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like.

I don't always post on UG, but when I do, I post in the Pit. Stay thirsty my friends.