#1
Hey,

I've been writing this song for last month or so... I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback or any tips on how to improve it.

Note: I wrote this in Guitar Pro so if it sounds a little funny thats why...

Thanks.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZvHJyJI8REw
Last edited by Macapala at Dec 18, 2011,
#2
Thanks for the crit! =)
I like the intro--strings, I believe? I'm not a fan of the sound that comes in ~0:20. Maybe a differenet instrument could work better?
Nice lead ~0:49. It started out calm and increased "momentum", so to speak. I like how you changed a sort of generic melody ~2:00 and made it interesting. I was getting bored and thinking you should have added a new instrument when that weird bassy sound shocked me! I don't like it one bit. But I enjoyed the lead after that. Overall, I think it's a good song, just add some things to keep it interesting in the middle.