Enjoyed the Lyrics, the spoken words worked nice with the rhythm, loved the rhythm track. The main thing i didnt fancy much was that high pitched vocal part didnt fit well to me. The reverb on the lyrics sounded like a bright tiled room etc, so maybe less reverb on them because to me they sounded too distant from the rest of the mix.

Other than that i really enjoyed it! I love songs about daughters! i have 2!

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