#2
First off I like the guitar tone, but your (what i think is) G string sounds a little out of tune. The percussion needs to come way up in the mix and be changed to something more energetic. The guitar ideas are cool, but i feel like the rhythm should be more dynamic. Also your tone is in my opinion a bit too midsy. I liked when the panned guitars came in that was some creative brilliance on your part.

crit me? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1505522
Too cool for a signature.