Sup UG, just wanted to post this bit of a W.I.P. here to get opinions from some folks who actually listen to this stuff (I don't like death metal really, except Blotted Science and a few clips here and there, maybe Obscura)

This is my attempt at writing this stuff -- It is not finished, if you guys have suggestions on what to fix/add that's awesome.

Thanks for listening
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