Hi, I'm trying to start doing more screaming on my bands tracks, can I get some critiques on it? Here is the track, the scream is obviously the last lines in the verses. Sorry of the quality, it was a home recorded demo. Might need to turn it up a bit to hear it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gdyDidFGp3U

Thank you very much
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