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The original version of this has been on my profile for a while, but I recently decided to remix it and ended doing a full on re-recording of it - all in a day's work

It's loaded to my profile, so go there to hear it. I've left the old version there as well if you want to compare them.

Comments on any of my other songs are welcomed as well, I always C4C although it sometimes takes me a day or two to find the time.
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#2
Playing seems a bit mechanical, if you could make the guitar a bit smoother that would really bring the riff together, also i think the lead could use a bit more creamy distortion. Vocals are a bit pitchy, but i like the melody and your tone...Really reminds me of Sabbath for some reason.
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