#3
The first part of the ending is great. Its a solid song, but I would like to see some more repetition, dont squeeze in all good riffs you have, but instead be a bit more selective and establish some chorus/refrain.

EDIT: this is all critique on a pretty high level though.
Last edited by Ich 666 at Dec 21, 2011,
#4
Quote by pagosapig
Hands down the best song I have heard on UG in a long time!!! This is great, I really like your style and everything sounds really natural (real drums, I do believe). All the guitar parts were great. You all got some serious skills

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28776773#post28776773


Thanks man! It means a lot, if you have a facebook, check us out. We'll be posting more stuff soon whenever we get our actual recordings finished.
http://www.facebook.com/severourskies
#5
Quote by Ich 666
The first part of the ending is great. Its a solid song, but I would like to see some more repetition, dont squeeze in all good riffs you have, but instead be a bit more selective and establish some chorus/refrain.

EDIT: this is all critique on a pretty high level though.


Yeah, we were actually debating repeating a few riffs in order to lengthen the song. It kinda speed through a bunch of them pretty fast. Thanks!