#1
She had to fight always in her life,
tried to make it better with a knife,
Oh, she was alive but she felt dead,
and her problems were just in her head!

She described her life as tragedy!
She never saw a reason, to be!
She had much to tell, but couldn't say,
that she thought her life was a lonly way!

My life was never easy,
but it always seems to me,
that my dreams came never true...
But when i take a look at you...
...then...
... i can see your true story!
...that...
...you never wanted to be!
....that...
...you're sick of your destiny!
...you say...
..."This all is too much for me!"

Oh, she's trying to forget that all!
But that's to hard in an endless fall.
I will try to save her from herself.
Because the clock strikes nearly twelve.

My life was never easy,
but it always seems to me,
that my dreams came never true...
But when i take a look at you...
...then...
... i can see your true story!
...that...
...you never wanted to be!
....that...
...you're sick of your destiny!
...you say...
..."This all is too much for me!"

[Solo]

Now you're standing alone in the rain!
And you feel like you can't fight the pain!
Now your blood is boiling in your veins!
Now you feel like there's nothing to gain!

Tell me, is there anything to lose?
Now search yourself, chase away the blues,
that you finaly can see the truth!
You don't know that you always can choose!
You know that there is so much to lose!

My life was never easy,
but it always seems to me,
that my dreams came never true...
But when i take a look at you...
...then...
... i can see your true story!
...that...
...you never wanted to be!
....that...
...you're sick of your destiny!
...you say...
..."This all is too much for me!"
Last edited by StreetBass252 at Dec 7, 2012,
#2
That need work:
Verse 2
Chorus

I like:
Verse 1
Verse 3
Verse 5

Verse 4 is a bit meh, starts really well but just loses me by the end. On the whole nothing really catches my eye (apart from the start of Verse 4). The song is quite long, maybe a bit too long. The chorus to me requires the most work. Also it doesn't seem to express enough emotion on the matter, but that could just be me. Hope that helps.
#3
Thank you. yes, i know this song isn't perfect yet. I'll work on this song, and will post the re-masterd version.