#1
So heres another of mine.

Rough night, and heres what became of it.

Dunno the title, prehaps you guys can give me suggestions?

What happens when you cant compete?
When your heart crys in defeat,
When these fights and cuts tear too deep?
While all you can do is cry yourself to sleep.


When the trees are stripped bare,
While the winds left crying all along
After those for whom you care,
Have left you alone and moved on,

Just sniff away the tears,
It feels like its been years and years,
Since you felt the warmth of the sun,
But dont worry, its not yet gone,


You're left wandering,
Just wondering if worth turning back,
All the while pondering, on,
How you made it this far along,


When the trees are stripped bare,
While the winds been crying all along
After those for whom you care,
Have left you alone, theyve moved on

Just sniff away the tears,
It feels like its been years and years,
Since you felt the warmth of the sun,
But dont worry, its not yet gone,


If its darkest just before a dawn,
Can you find the will to solider on?
When all you loves left and gone,
And your feeling like you just dont belong.


When the trees are stripped bare,
The winds been crying all along
After those for whom you care,
Have left you alone and moved on

Just Sniff away the tears,
If feels like its been years and years,
Since you felt the warmth of the sun,
But dont worry, its not yet gone,
Remember youve made it this far along.
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Last edited by Josh01993 at Dec 22, 2011,
#3
I thought I put that in, my bad, its an acoustic. (like all my stuff =P)
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#4
Use something from your hook to create the title, either "Tears", "Been Years", "Years and Years", "Don't Worry", "Not Gone", "Not Yet Gone"... I wouldn't complicate it, something that gets the point across. And remember you cannot copyright a Title... so don't worry about using a title that has been done a million times before. If that is what the song is about then lay it out there!
Well. what.
#5
Yeah I was thinking tears, but I dunno, doesnt seem to suit the song.
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#6
I think a good title would be "This Far Along" or "This Far", cause the last line goes "Remember you've made it this far along"

Anyways, great song!
#7
Thanks haha. And hmmm, not bad, I might just call it that
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