Just want to hear your opinions on tone, recording, video, etc.

Anything I could use to improve the audio or video portion of this cover.

the two mistakes i'm are of are:
1. there's a slight mistake with the acoustic video. i accidentally deleted the original video and had to record another
2. i didn't hear the clipping of the acoustic line in - pickup - until after compression, by which time i didn't feel like re-recording

i look forward to hearing any comments about this one