#1
No drums, too... sorry. If someone could write them for me I would critique any songs you've written fully!

Also, it's sort of incomplete. And yeah, I know my solo writing is terrible... but yeah... if someone could just let me know how this is so far lol...

It sounds much better on real guitar too, and the timing is a little weird (I suck with that too)...

But yeah, I'll C4C just please leave comments. The harsher, the better I suppose!
Attachments:
Industrial Discipline Another Song.gp5
There will be zero tolerance
For the creator of hallowed intentions
There will be zero tolerance
Fate is your deciding God
#2
Nevermind, I thought it would be considered crap anyway..
There will be zero tolerance
For the creator of hallowed intentions
There will be zero tolerance
Fate is your deciding God