#2
Really well put together. Especially the video, I mean the song is great too, but the video is what really sets this apart from anything else that gets posted on this section of UG. Harmonies around 2:00 were completely fitting.

Your voice sounds like if a really chill Chester [of linkin park], the lead singer of Hoobastank, and Death Cab for Cutie had a baby. But I like all of their voices so that is meant as a compliment. Really like the electronic drums as well.

Just to offer some sort of criticism, I felt like this needed to build up somewhere at least once just to give it a contrasting texture of sorts. But thats just a feeling, the song is still super good the way it is. You've now got my sub.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1503490
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#3
Wow that was very detailed and helpful. thank you so much. i'm on my way to crit your stuff now.