Hey dude,

I thought you did a pretty good job. It's a difficult song - especially without any kind of backing track, so gotta give you thumbs up for that. I'm not a singer at all, so I don't wanna judge that part too much, but I thought you could give it a little extra 10% or so. Don't hold back, cause this can be really awesome with a little more practicing, I think.

You need to work on your dynamics a lot on the guitar, this is a song that's loaded with feeling and dynamic control is very important---trying smoothing up everything too, it didn't seem to flow 100% through all the time... it's a good effort, but this is a song that you should come back to and do again when later on in your playing years.

c4c: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1507812