Good song, and overall sound. I think that the vocals are a bit low in the mix, and agree that it ended a little awkardly. I think that you could use a little more guitar layering through the first 2/3 of the song. Also the drums were a little simple, but overall it was good.
"Pain or damage don't end the world nor despair, nor fuckin' beatings. The world ends when you're dead, until then you have more punishment in store. Stand it like a man, and give some back."