#1
Sup! I've got some riffs put together, and eventually this will be all part of a full song but I'm kind of stuck at this point. Can I get some crit on what I have so far? C4C also
Attachments:
guitar riffs.gp5
guitar riffs.gp4
Last edited by touke at Jan 2, 2012,
#2
The verses are great. Intro needs more direction. A sense that it's going somewhere. The higher section in the bridge sounds great as well but the next part sounds a little random, especially the fills. Also, I would suggest putting the triplet section in a different song as it kind of brings the listener out of the groove of the piece. Overall though youu've got some cool riffs.
#3
Cool, some good suggestions man. I'm working on the intro, I know it's kind of dull as it is but I liked the basic idea of that riff. Which bars are the ones that sound random? Thanks for the crit!
#4
Bars 34 through 50 seem random in this piece. If they were in something a little darker and more akin to them, would wouldn't be.
#5
Oh I see what you mean. I had that riff previously written before all the rest, I'll work on that one to make it more relevant to the other riffs. thanks for the reply