I'd love to hear what you guys thing of the songwriting as well as the performance and recording quality. This was all done from home. What things shoul we work on?

P.s. The song gets a lot heavier towards the end so if you don't listen all the way through you won't get the full picture. Thanks! C4C
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Last edited by QuantumMechanix at Jan 5, 2012,
Thanks for the crit on mine, on to yours...

Like the intro, cool riff. Vocals suit the song well, and you mange to pull off having both clean and harsh vocals. The guitar tone is ok, but there's too much fuzz coming from it. Playing pretty tight. Like the more leady part that comes in around the middle of the song. The heavy section is cool, and takes the song in a different direction, which keeps it interesting. Overall, it's pretty good! Nice work.