#1
Hi there,

This is a live solo acoustic version of 'See', an original. I've only just started acoustic stuff and this is one of the first performances of it :/

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G47rc3PPmpQ

Please tell me what you think. When I record it, I plan to use clean electric instead of an acoustic guitar - and also stick harmonies + solos in the bridge.

Cheers, and C4C as always!
AJ
#2
I would love to hear this recorded, as opposed to live. But I think this is a good representation of how the song sounds. Your voice sounds a bit shaky. In some parts, I feel like it works better than others. I understand the adrenaline of a live performance could make your voice a bit shaky. I would LOVE to hear the recorded version of this, when you do have one, be sure to upload it! All in all, great job.

Check out mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1509177
#4
the guitar parts are very entertaining and rythmic, its sounds very good. Sounds like your haven't been singing as long as you've been playing guitar. Keep practicing that of coarse.
I Think if you record it, Drums are a must. With a drum beat to match the guitar pieces it would sound ****ing sweet. nice work 8/10

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iZlbCZLcjII
#5
Thanks very much for the feedback! I have been singing less than the amount of time I've been playing guitar... think I just need to get used to singing and playing at the same time, I get distracted! haha

I've commented back on all of your threads and videos, I'm impressed!