#1
New song,

it's a fairly simple, quite depressing and a generally downbeat acoustic song.

I'm working on an album which I just intend to sell on bandcamp (why not?) and I'm thinking of sticking this at the end to just round things off.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sSLdKUonVEo&feature=channel_video_title

Let me know what you think and as always, I will C4C if you want me to
#4
I like this. The playing is good, the vocals are good, and the song is well written. My only complaint would be the clipping. When you get louder, it clips a lot, and that can be distracting, which is unfortunate because the song is good.

Great work, and thanks for checking mine out
#6
I quite like the song, but I would love to see the song produced with with some light drums, bass and so forth. I also found the popping annoying but that's not part of the actual song. Finally for some reason the main guitar riff to me also sounds like the it could be speed up and 'arctic monkeyized' But that might just be me anyway here is a link to my stuff https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28868127#post28868127