no vocals yet, imagine slowdives singer, but more attractive

this is how it kinda sounds on piano, i changed it a little, but it makes the verses and chorus more clear?

UPDATE this^is what i just recorded, took me an hour but i finally think i know where im going with this, this is only guitar
thanks for the feedback guys
Last edited by jrcsgtpeppers at Jan 7, 2012,
I really enjoyed listening to this. Everything sounded good together, I did love when the synths came in it the beginning, wasnt expecting it, but it was a great suprise. Even without vocals, and can get a clear verse and chorus from the actually demo recording, Really curious to see how you put vocals into it though

All in all, Great job, keep it up