check this out and let me know what you guys think? Solo was done ad lib and the riff is something I've had for a couple of years that I just started working on again recently. Used a Dean ML into a Digitech RP12 with Reaper. Solo had some Low pass tweaks and I may have fed my already distorted signal into Nick Crowes 6505 >.>

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I intend to fix up some of the mix (drums are a bit overpowering) and I really want to make it into a longer song, like 5 minutes, but I don't think I can do that with this sort of metal song.
Should I repeat the rhythm twice and have the solo over the second? I've got a distant cousin riff, should I toss that in there aswell? Do you like the drums? What frequencies should I cut out?
I've got a mic setup that needs a couple more pieces and then after I find a sound I might start recording vocals. Scary
Anyways check it out, C4C

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