#1
Our first at writing a post hardcore style song. The song is rough right now and we plan on editing it more but it would be great to see what other people think. We would greatly appreciate any feedback! C4C


http://www.mediafire.com/?kfkrs15fi60b99c
Last edited by ftf109 at Jan 7, 2012,
#3
I have to say it got pretty interesting from bar 24 and on
The breakdown intro should be more interesting though, but vocals could fix that
104 and on sounds pretty good, I personally like "dark" sweeping parts (though I prefer more melodic ones), but at bar 109, third guitar, can you even play that super fast sweeping part? It sounds a little overwhelming also :p
#4
Quote by Erra93
I personally like "dark" sweeping parts (though I prefer more melodic ones), but at bar 109, third guitar, can you even play that super fast sweeping part? It sounds a little overwhelming also :p



Yeah i see what you mean with the fast sweeping part, it looks harder on here then it is to play. It'd probably be better to make it a little simpler. Thanks for the input!