#1
Hello people..!

This is Praneet here, an 18-year old college student from India.
Here's my first musical creation...!! Take a look..!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqjwQGrAoXA

PS: i've not been trained AT ALL..self learnt both guitar and harmonica. Try keepin that in mind before you trash it out..! :P

So, without further ado,

My first original song - written, composed and performed by yours truly, on an acoustic guitar and a harmonica - called BAHULIYA'S BLUES..!!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqjwQGrAoXA

Scroll down for the lyrics. I've been repeatedly told they're the best part of the song..!
#2
I think it's a cool little song, your playing was pretty solid. You do need to work on your singing though. The lyrics were nice, original. You did kinda feel pretty "stiff" when you were playing, kinda watch how Axel Mansoor gets into the groove of things http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HkH2L3rXrC0&feature=plcp&context=C3f5565cUDOEgsToPDskJOKSGTn92L-t6S-8gumQHG

Those are really the only things I can think, it's a good song

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