Song i wrote the other day tell me what you think and give any suggestions and obviously c4c
I really liked that lick you had going on from bar 16 to 18, really catchy. Reminded me a bit of Carcass' Death Certificate. The solo parts would need some work, definitely something more characteristic.
This is not kinda my style metal, but you have some cool riffs there going on I agree with Sakke. 16-18 bar riff was most awesome IT should sound even better when you get some drums going on there!
The guitars compliment either so well! This is such a badass intro! The leads are nicely written and have an evil sound to them. Love the riff starting at 54. This whole thing is legit. You planning on recording this sometime??