#2
It's a great instrumental, and the productions actually decent honestly, but I always pay waaay more attention to songwriting, that's the important thing.

Great job overall, I like the sound of the drums and the overall guitar writing is very solid with lots of very well written rhythm parts.

Overall, keep it up.
#3
Thanks a lot man. I forgot to mention that this is supposed to be quite a vocals-reliant song, I just haven't finished writing the vocal melody. But glad to see it sounds good as as instrumental too Check out some of my other songs on my soundcloud if you like, they're all sorta in a similar style