#1
This is the first time I've attempted something like this, and I gotta say I really enjoyed it. I'd love to hear some opinions on this piece; it's quite short, but it is a first attempt.

Here's the link:

http://katharsis.co.za/music/darkSongJan2012.mp3
Last edited by powerhead at Jan 13, 2012,
#2
Thanks for your crit on my post, man (https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28923724#post28923724)
I'm going out of town this weekend, and without access to a laptop, and I'm literally leaving in the next 5min, so I'll fulfill my C4C as soon as I get back, I promise.
#3
Cheers for the crit.

It's good what you've got so far. I like the sounds you've got, especially the wobbly bass, although the whole thing sounds a little low quality, I'm guessing that's to do with streaming it off that site. One thing I didn't like was the sound of that fairly high pitched synth near the end when it first comes in, I think it's a little too sharp on the ears, but what happens with it afterwards is pretty sick. Maybe you should give it a short fade in? I dunno. But yeah keep working on it. Did you use Reason for this btw?
#4
My girlfriend just got out of the shower and your music made her dance. At least for a little while haha. This is pretty cool background music, it's not too invasive. Reminds me of a mix between Half Life 2 and Quake 3 music. Definitely expand on it if you enjoy making it, to me it was a great start.
#6
The idea is cool but wayyy too bassy. Try putting a low cut around the 20hz range so that you don't end up blowing any speakers.
It's interesting nonetheless.
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#7
As promised, here I am, fulfilling my crit duty.

Nice sound, not a fan of dubstep, but it had its charm. Needs more ambience and open, airy stuff. The bass is a little suffocating in the song. Great idea, though. I would like to see this fleshed out into a full song.