#1
Hi there!
Here is a sunny jazz/blues song i wrote, and recorded to day.
http://soundcloud.com/kjartan-thorkildsen/jus-original-jazz-song

Please give me some constructive critisism, if so i wil try my best to do the same to you! (But please don't bother to much of the production, it was my first song recorded ever)

Enjoy!
#3
Quote by DanielShaw123
Cool groove.

Oh thanks. The funny thing is that the groove instruments where not very well recorded. The bass was my guitar dropped down an octave, and the drums where ez drumers "metalheads". For some reason "metalheads" sounded better than the standard EZ drummer set.
#5
Nice and mellow man, I like it. The lead is pretty catchy too, definitely got the sunny vibe so well done on that. My only complaint is that I think the lead is too high in the mix, I can barely hear the rhythm guitar or the hi-hats, snare or pedal. I dunno if it's supposed to be like that, but if not it'd be a simple fix to just re-adjust the levels because guitar tone-wise it's great.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1511530
#6
Ye thats got a sound I can get into. Again, I dont think you really need to make the LEAD instrument the loudest, it just needs to cut, EQ , or effects, or put it in stereo, etc. The guitar sounds great , and you really captured a laid back vibe with it. GOOD JOB, KEEP GOING.

C4C

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1511860
Don't tell me what can not be done

Don't tell me what can be done, either.



I love you all no matter what.
#7
It would be really great on some type of hollowbody. What pickup were you using and where was your tone knob at? Neck pickup+hollowbody+tone rolled off=instant jazz.
#8
Quote by WalkinDude91
It would be really great on some type of hollowbody. What pickup were you using and where was your tone knob at? Neck pickup+hollowbody+tone rolled off=instant jazz.

I used a solidbody ltd guitar with dimarzios :P Used neckpickup (liquifire) and tone at full. I wasnt going for a really muddy tone.