I really like the song! I think you could improve the intonation of your vibrato and a couple other riffy areas of the song by breathing deeper into your stomach and supporting the note with your diaphragm. In addition to staying on top of the note, that technique will also help project a rounder, fuller sound. Of course, maybe you're already doing that and youtube compression screwed it up.
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I was in a nu-metal band when I was 15. I hated the top 3 strings (G,B, and E). I wondered why guitars even had them.
Thank you both for your input! Much appreciation. and no it's a Takamine G Series